by Sarah Ann Jul 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Tiny fingers, gorgeous face |
by Dianna M Tuohy
Heartbreaking... |
by Sourav
Absolutely amazing poem! It's very sad and tragic... You've written it so strongly... One best poem I've read in the recent times. |
I really like this poem, though its really sad. Very good job. |
by Amberinaa
Wow, a tear is rolling down my cheak, that was extremely heart wrenching and painful to read. But it was so beautiful. Your words gave it so much grace and it just flowed. The young girl is truely lucky to have someone like you remeber her and not just consider her another one that slipped away. She would be honored! and i hope you realize you tried your best but sometimes things just happen for a reason. |
by ABrookeD
This almost cried reading this poem. You put your words together so well. Great job. You really have a lot of talent. Keep it up. 5/5 |