Im sorry you couldnt save the girl, young life snatched away so cruely but remember it wasnt your fault all though you may feel guilt, it was a beautiful poem and i felt your shame and emotion and i felt the girls pain , keep writing you have a talent xxx

This almost cried reading this poem. You put your words together so well. Great job. You really have a lot of talent. Keep it up. 5/5

p.s. no problem, i love reading poems. Yours are really good.

Wow, a tear is rolling down my cheak, that was extremely heart wrenching and painful to read. But it was so beautiful. Your words gave it so much grace and it just flowed. The young girl is truely lucky to have someone like you remeber her and not just consider her another one that slipped away. She would be honored! and i hope you realize you tried your best but sometimes things just happen for a reason.

Much love

Amberina*

I really like this poem, though its really sad. Very good job.

Absolutely amazing poem! It's very sad and tragic... You've written it so strongly... One best poem I've read in the recent times.

Heartbreaking...