Sunsets effect

by ikhlas   Jul 8, 2006


MY HEART CLENCHES AT THE SIGHT
MAKING MY EYES GO BLIND FROM THE LIGHT
COLORS SOARING RITE PAST MY EYES
RED ORANGE BLUE AND PINK RITE ACROSS THE SKIES
A SITE MORE BEAUTIFUL THAN A PERSONS FACE
THE SITE MAKING YOUR HEART RACE
THE TEXTURES SO REFINED AND SO ODDLY COMFORTING
YOU'LL FEEL LIKE YOU CAN DO ANYTHING
STARING AT IT I FEEL AT PEACE
SOMETHING I NEVER FELT A PART OF ME RELEASE
SOMETHING SO INTENSE IT MAKES ME QUIVER
LIKE WHEN A BREEZE UNEXPECTEDLY RUNS BY MAKING ME SHIVER
WHEN I LOOK AT IT I FEEL SOMEHOW LIKE I'M BY MY SELF
ALL RAPT UP IN A QUILT WITH ITS TEXTURE SO SOFT IT SURROUNDS MY HEALTH
ITS LITE SHINES ON ME SO BRIGHTLY AND WARM
SOMETIMES I WONDER HOW CAN SOMETHING SO BEAUTIFUL TURN INTO SOMETHING AS SCARY AS A STORM
I COULD JUST SIT THERE FOR HOURS WATCHING IT
I COULD NEVER GET TIRED OF ITS LIGHT THAT SURROUNDS ME LIKE CANDLES FINELY LIT
BUT NOTHING IS COMPARED TO THE BEAUTY OF A SUNSET
NOT EVEN THE MOST PRECIOUS OF GIFT LIKE A ROS SET
TH SUN KISSES MY SKIN MAKING ME WARM TO THE TOUCH
THE SUNS WARMTH MAKING ME BLUSH
THE LIGHT STREAMS THROUGH BRANCHES AND CUT GRASS
MAKING THEM LOOK ALMOST MYTHICAL IN THE SUNS PATH
THE SUNSETS EFFECT ON ME NEVER QUITS
ITS LIGHT AND WARMTH SCRAMBLING MY WITS
WHEN I LOOK AT IT NOW I FEEL LOVED
KNOWING SOMEWHERE OUT THERES A POWERFUL GOD ABOVE

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  • 18 years ago

    by Raychil

    I found this to be an interesting poem. A few gramatical errors, but it happens. Don't try too hard to write, let the words flow, don't force them.