Can//t you hear the screams?

by SaveMe?   Jul 8, 2006


Can//t you hear the screams?
And the sound of those feet
Climbing up the stairs
The fastness of her hart beat

She knows he//s coming
To shout and hit
To tell her why she//s ruined their evening
And is such a misfit

Can//t go downstairs
Ill just end up in a fight
I live day in day out
In a terrified fright

Dreading the evenings
When friends go home
With him and mum
Left to cope alone

I have to sit and wait
Through the shouts and screams
Through flying glasses and tears
Everything falling apart at the seems

Take a hit and a smack
I really don//t mind
Im used to it now
But strengths// hard to find

Lash out and yell
At this disgrace of a girl
You want her to be like the others
But instead abuse you hurl

Why do you do it?
Want to make her feel bad?
She already know she//s not good enough
For even her step-dad

Blow everything Out of proportion
Make me feel so small
I just want it to go back to normal
When you could hear my callâ?¦

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  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Perhaps you should run a tiny spell check on it, some things, like heart, were spelt hart, etc.
    But I still got the full meaning of the poem.
    It just needs a final polish.
    I must say I loved your rhyming scheme, the words and emotion that you used, they sounded very...strong, indeed.
    I hope that you are ok.

    //T.L.//

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Alot is going on and alot of twisted emotions. i can relate on that. it's amazing that u move on through all that. it's a really gr8 poem. it got a good rythme:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Burn It Baby. ! .

    Ilysm Alice brett! =D
    You keep getting better and better with these poems you do!
    Stop it =]!
    Have fun.
    xxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by crazy babe with no brains

    Love this poem bbaes it very sad but it really good 4/5. nearly made me cry :'( lol mwah luff ya xx

  • 18 years ago

    by kida

    This is sad and wats worse is it really happens gr8 writin though good style.