I know this feeling, and good job..keep expressing yourself

Read 'Real Pain' its on eof mine, and It relates to this..

I thought this was a good way of expressing the situation n i really enjoyed it

This is sad and wats worse is it really happens gr8 writin though good style.

Love this poem bbaes it very sad but it really good 4/5. nearly made me cry :'( lol mwah luff ya xx

Ilysm Alice brett! =D
You keep getting better and better with these poems you do!
Stop it =]!
Have fun.
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Alot is going on and alot of twisted emotions. i can relate on that. it's amazing that u move on through all that. it's a really gr8 poem. it got a good rythme:)

Perhaps you should run a tiny spell check on it, some things, like heart, were spelt hart, etc.
But I still got the full meaning of the poem.
It just needs a final polish.
I must say I loved your rhyming scheme, the words and emotion that you used, they sounded very...strong, indeed.
I hope that you are ok.

//T.L.//