Thought to Try

by Momentary Relapse   Jul 8, 2006


I thought that I could love you
And love you I did
But then you tried to end it
And so that became my bid

To live or to die
Now that's the choice to make
Dare I decide to continue on
Or to simply allow you to take

I thought that I could trust you
But trust was never coming
You promised that you were true
And yet you had been shunning

I thought that I could trust you
And trust you I tried
But you proved to be a liar
Shown by the tears I've cried

I tried to love you
I tried to care
But you were the one who ended it
You left me weeping there

So you cannot be the one to ask
You will only receive the simple reply
About how it used to be
And the simple question why

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Good one..

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    There was nothing wrong or out of place with this poem.
    was perfect.
    it just didnt reach me.
    i suppose im not 'into' this kind of poem.
    but im sure many others would disagree.
    each to their own as they say.
    ~Emah
    4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Fluffy

    Very well expressed. Excellent vocab and great use of effective language.

    Well done =].

    -Elysium.

    P.S: Do check out my new poem. Please and thank you =].