Very well expressed. Excellent vocab and great use of effective language.

Well done =].

-Elysium.

P.S: Do check out my new poem. Please and thank you =].

There was nothing wrong or out of place with this poem.
was perfect.
it just didnt reach me.
i suppose im not 'into' this kind of poem.
but im sure many others would disagree.
each to their own as they say.
~Emah
4/5

Good one..