by BlueEyedMystery Jul 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You're My Everything, My World |
I really cried when i read this song!! |
Chorus was really good...i didnt know the melody of the song so i couldnt really picture it in all its glory but even from what i read...it wowed me...keep it up!! |
Cayce - |
by Shawna
Great job!! I especially liked the stanza that says 'I hope she breaks your heart, like you did mine' Its nice to hear some honest emotions!! On the last verse did you mean to write 'About HOW we loved and lost'? |
by J Lau
Another great write... Emotional and heartfelt. Sorry to read about your sad story... hang in there... tomorrow is a better day. Beautifully written though. 5/5 |