Comments : Torn in Two

  • 18 years ago

    by Kyle

    I know exactly how u feel....i dont think greeley will ever be the same....no i know it wont be the same! this is going to sux soooooo much

  • Mmm i really like this one lil jov....i dont know i'f i'd capitalize forever at the end tho...i can't decide what i think of the effect of that yet...but i dunno yet...its very good tho! love you! xo

  • I love this poems 5/5.....its so real & i think ever1 can relate to it once in a while

  • 18 years ago

    by .::Lovely*Letdown::.

    Haha dude..i remember that night!! holy crap that got WAY out of hand! i felt really bad! lol sorry for pulling that on u kyle! haha but it's still an EXCELLENT poem for being written in like 2 minutes...LITERALLY! haha i love you!!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Kyle

    Wow!! this poem can to life for me, i know how you feel and you wrote it so well. great job! 5/5