Great lyrics, awesome job. strong emotion could be felt. Well done. =)

Wow, this was brilliant, tho you fell into the "crimson-cliche" that so many people submit to:

"watch the crimson red flow"
"with crimson wrists"...

the crimson has probs been overdone a little....

however, i absolutely adored verse three:

"And I'll Play my song
so i feel like i belong
I'll play it on my wrist
my arm; the violin
and the blade; the bow
the scars will show
I'll write the lyrics upon my arm too
and it will say..
It's because of you
I was alone all along
and now..I'm gone
cause i.."

that is the most well written stanza ive seen in a while. you possess substantial talent, keep writing!

Great poem hun! once again youve taken a well written theme and made it your own by taking all the little cliques that people had forgotten were beautiful and woven them together with a load of origonal images and viewpoints. great emotion!
xxx

That is extremley depressing....
i loved it alot, great work.
i miss you so much darling..
take care and great job