Wow... this is so good its chilling...
rhymes could be a little more complex in the beginning... i LOVED this rhyme tho:

"the baby's complexion
is like her rapers reflection"

^^ That was brilliant :) fantastic twist, encapturing read :) well done!

Wow! im not usually a bit fan of shock story poems but theres something about this one that just caught me. youve absolutely captured the emotion and thoguht train in the situation. and youve written it in such a way, with an uninvolved narrator and an almost cold tone that makes it seem almost in slow motion like its underwater., i dont know how to explain it, but this is an amazing poem! please write lots more? soon?
xxx

Wow! the idea wasn't too original, but u wrote it so well that set it apart from the others. congrats on a well flowing poem. =)