OMG! Aww.. that was soo sad.. It made me want to cry! I loved the story the poem told. It flow VERY well. The rhyming was very good! You both did an amazing job! Keep it up! 5/5

Cayce x

Wow.....that is one of the saddest poems I have read in a while...It is filled with emotion and the flow is soo good. The way both of you wrote it is amazing and the imagery is perfection---One of the best! 5/5

Wow... that gave me chills. It was so very beautifully written and so sad. And I love that way that you ended it. Really makes you think, and appreciate things more. But I absolutely love this poem. It's so good. I just can't seem to find a better word for it. The flow and rhythm was really good, and it rhymed well. This was really good. Great job to the both of you!! 5/5

Wow! that was so powerful and sad. It's amasing how you both worked together to get such an amasing poem, you are both obviously very talented.

Great work, for both of you.

--Steph

A sad story, but a great poem. nice job

Omg!! ..That was sooo sad. But it was really good. Just really sad.

I don't know if this was actually based on anything true or not.. But I hope it's not. You and Jessy both did an amazing job on this. It was really powerful with all the emotions. Keep it up!! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

OMG, that was such a tragic write. You two are talented poets, but everything you write seems so sad!! I really wish you both the best, and I hope you make it through your rough times. I wouldn't want to see talent like this wasted. Wow, I can't believe how emotional this is making me! Sorry, I just care too much!..

Holy Moly!! That poem is so freaking sad. The last line is so true. 5/5 Good work writing this. Keep it up.

OMG
Nelle, Jessy..
I am absolutely SPEECHLESS. This was just.. simply amazing. All of it. I CRiED reading this poem. I don`t even have the words to describe the amount of emotion and imagery that was put into this. Just AMAZiNG.
5/5. If it were possible, you`d get a 6/5.
Great job

Samantha Hollywood

Wow, I really liked the ending. Good job!!

Beautifully tragic... absolutly wonderful

Damn that poem was nice as shit alot of emotion in it i liked it alot

Like the poem, but the poem didnt flow 2 well, i would flow in one point then lose its rythem

Wow that is so sad!
love your work,
mel

Oh wow this is sad.
but good peom none the less...good job

Wow that made me cry that was a really amazing poem