by XxFallenxFromxGracexX Jul 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I lie in total darkness |
by moonlil
Very nice one! Love it. |
The poem started off really nice and powerful, but the in the end it started to die and get less powerful so the end klindof left you in an akward state..like..."oh, its over"..well thats the only thing i though needed a bit of improvement..otherwise it was a very beautiful dark poe,:) |
by the middle
This is good... well written and good rhymes...i enjoyed reading it:) |