by BlueEyedMystery Jul 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
She Couldn't Tell The Truth |
@...The last 4 stanzas were my favourite....they just put the whole poem in its place. Some of the rhyming sounded a tad bit forced but it was good all the same:)...@5/5 |
Cayce - |
by AnnMarie
Great poem very unique it was wonderful and it flowed great also!!! |
by Shawna
OH, SAD!! This was a great write. I loved the ending 'Now who should we blame'. 5/5 |
by J Lau
I can certainly relate to that as I witnessed a similar situation with a dear friend of mine. Truly a sad story but well written... Keep up the great work! 5/5 |