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by mimzy Jul 9, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / other
Alone in the dark She was so scared She could've died You wouldn't have cared She'd call your name Praying to be heard While in the corner Her baby's body stirred As passed the day And arose the sun She got to realize The pain had only just begun Because no matter how she'd scream No matter how she'd cry You wouldn't have cared You wouldn't have told her why
by SaveMe?
Aww sad poem but really good you expressed your emotions so well 5/5 keep up the great work 5/5 lovelove Alice xxx
by Christie
Wow. great poem. really effective. =) i've been reading through ur poems, ur a writer with potential. =) Keep up the great work. xx