Sunset in my Hometown

by mossgirl19   Jul 9, 2006


Before dusk I see the sun
slowly going back home
to where all lights began
like a brisk comb
moving in the sky.

Here where I have grown
I watch you move
unknowingly to many
you have found your place.

Come back once again
and shine before me
the heavenly light
I love to see.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, I was blown away by this poem. You really know how to get people to think. You really had some nice images in this one, and it was so very powerful. Amazing write.