[ Im not a big fan about commas in poetry, ecspecially at the end of a stanza. ]

Other than that I really liked it. It's hard to had a family member in jail but its good you think he will turn his life around. Im glad to hear that. Good work on the poem, keep writing

Juls

WOW! This was great. =D
I just noticed you had a new poem, you`re on my faves list, so I decided to check it out. =D
I`ve got no complaints, it was soo emotional and deep and I really loved it. Great job!! 5/5
Keep up your amazing work!

Samantha Hollywood

You can tell there was a lot of feeling involed and I know how you must feel and yea its hard but its really good that you can write it down and release a little....all in all I liked your poem.

Wow...babe, i loved this and i can relate a lot...the same thing happened with my brother..but he is in prison for life..but yeah, You really poured your heart out and showed very very strong emotions..it was an aswesome write...Great job! 5/5

Wow.. I loved this poem. My uncle is in jail, and he's getting out this year. He's saying he's going to do better and stuff too. I just hope he means it. This was an excellent poem. I like the fact that it didn't rhyme, it made it seem like there was more emotion in it. Good luck to your cousin! I hope everything turns out great.

Cayce x

Great job on this. It's so sad that your cousin went to jail, but i hope he comes out as a better person and realizes what he's done. I can relate to this, i had a friend in jail for a while, but he's changed now and i'm sure your cousin can to .

Anyway, i loved the poem

--Steph

Excellent poem! It was really discriptive and it flowed wonderfully!!!

Please r/r/c four of mine...........

That is such a sweet and heartfelt poem. I'm glad that he's getting out soon and I hope that everything works out for him :) The poem was really good, it sounded like it came straight from the heart. Great job on this. 5/5 Keep it up & Stay strong! & I wish your cousin the best!

That was really great... and very sweet, came from the heart i can tell... hopefully he does turn it around... nice work 5/5

Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)