by Jacob Perry Jul 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Tears well behind mine eyes. |
by LadyPearl
Beautiful job. I liked the torn wings part. Great imagery. You may want to check your spelling again. |
Some nice descriptions. Overall something cool. A little bit of a flow problem. But it's something different and cool. |
by Sourav
Nice poem... You expressed yourself very well... Nice work! |
by Pure Silence
Well said, whomever gave you a 4 is a meanie =], though you do need some puncuation ...*spelling is worng I know sue me* Lol, and you need to capitalize your "I"s other then that kudos to you Jaky ^_^ |