Riding The Wind

by loretta Taylor   Jul 9, 2006


Serenity slips over me
A second skin
On my horse
Riding the wind

All the madness kept at bay
A glacial stream flowing away

Calmness encompasses me
A warm breathless sea

Soul tearing sadness leaves my day
Waterfalls rushing mud away

Happiness burst empty dreams
Musical gurgling streams

Solitutde shatters pain
A thunderstorm’s driven rain

Serenity slips over me
A second skin
On my horse
Riding the wind

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rich

    I love this! I grew up a cowboy in Arizona then rode all the trails while working along the coastline in California. I know that magical feelling. Beautiful!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Awesome poem....I understand the second skin...riding the wind...beautiful.

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Nice piece of poetry - it reflects a lot of what you say in your profile.

    peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey this is really a very nicely written piece of art, thanks for ur lovely comments and am glad to be in your fav list.....so are you in mine now.. :o)

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    I think you repeated on my horse riding the wind too many times. I think you could combine weather patterns, incidents, whatever you want to call them, into less stanzas but bigger, and then you wouldn;t have to repeat yourself so much

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