by SweetxMisery Jul 9, 2006
category :
Special events /
other poems
You may not know where your going |
by BrokenMisery
Wow, hit the core and pain of war. I hate war, i hate how it has become a neccesity, i hate knowing that someone who i used to talk to is in Lebanon, in amungst a war killing hundreds, and I may never see her again. War is drastic and you captured it, nicely flowed, perhaps the last line was a bit short, but still good. Keep it up! |
by ~*Sachi*~
Awesome work Kayla! thanx for the really sweet comment! |
by darkness
Thx i like yours to :) |