Again, lacking in poetic flow. But it's good on imagery, different from much of the melancholy of P&Q poetry, and it carries in it a warmth which I find very endearing.

Thank you Ed for your honest comment, I really appreciate it. I enjoy writing poetry, but I also want to improve, so I appreciate your honesty.

Serendib,

Thanks for your positive comments regarding my poem ~ glad you liked it. Also, my poems are written about special people/events in my life, so I appreciate your kind words.