Comments : You won't win

  • 17 years ago

    by Krissy

    This is a great poem...tho its sad... but i like it good job...:)

  • 17 years ago

    by WitherBlisterBurnandPeel

    It's vivid, but can appeal to everyone. It was well written and mysterious, great job! I thouroughly enjoyed it.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    This was just compeltly beautiful Babara. I don't know any other words to say. 5/5
    Hang in there and thanks for your friendship.
    xoxox Rhea xoxox

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    Absolutely beautiful poem...

    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by Colby

    Good, strong and powerful word choice. Says a lot in such a little time...