by Kara ! Jul 9, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Indifference to the velvety skies, |
by Bret Higgins
This poem takes me back to the days when I lived back in the UK and my sister, who would rather sit and chat online or play on her PS2 than come out and with the rest of us for a walk. |
by N J Thornton
Good use of imagery vocab, really painted a beautiful picture even though it is unseen. |
by LadyPearl
Interesting poem, though I don't feel like it's relating to the title much except the last part. |
I Like Your Writing Style Its Diffrent And I Sincerly Admire It *No Lie* "Raindrops trickle, but go unnoticed |
Jeeze, this reminds me of so so many people that I know. I can relate to this and you've used some simple but beautiful words I think anyoner who appreciates this world can relate to. |