Wow, beautiful poem! i have no critique for that. 5/5

Wow wow wow!! This is really DAMN good! And true aswell....people always tend to overlook true beauty, they always notice and comment on fake-plastic beauty but never TRUE beauty.

The imagery is wonderful and the way you worded it was superb!

I loved it!!

Raindrops trickle, but go unnoticed
Falling softly onto unseen lands
[I really liked those two lines. They were wow!]

I actually just liked this whole poem. Even though it was short, you worded it great and it just made it so much more powerful.

I wish I could write something like this. It was awesome! Not a thing I would change at all. Oooh. I also like the way you ended it aswell. Thought it was great!! Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Hmm, this is one of those random poems that gets you thinking, it's also one of those poems, where you read something, and remember a hilarious inside joke with your friends. Lol, the inside joke behind this one is about evolution, and how it's forgotten. This was a really good poem. Awesome stuff.

Beautifullly written, my only suggestion would be to put three periods (...) instead of two, lol but other then that everything seems great!
keep it up!

I really like the three stanzas, very descriptive and beautiful. I'm not so sure I like how it ends, with those two single lines. It seems like a rushed ending. But perhaps that's just me.

Kara, wow! Your vocabulary is very vivid, it adds a nice twist to the poem. Most people just use simple words, but yours were more complex and it seems to make the poem more interesting. This poem held a lot of emotion and depth ;; I really liked it.
Much thanks for your comment on my poem, meant a lot. =D

Hollywood

This was really interesting and thought provoking. Liked this with how it had been done. Really it just...was good because it had used the words quite well to complement this piece.
~Faith-less

I really liked this poem...it was kind of random but made you stop and think

Great poem. Nice language and word harmony!

This is really god, to me it felt like the writer is trying to deal with the fact that someone close to them has depression, and is putting into words how idsinterested that person is in all the wonders of our world.

Jeeze, this reminds me of so so many people that I know. I can relate to this and you've used some simple but beautiful words I think anyoner who appreciates this world can relate to.

My only suggestion would be to turn those last two words into another stanza, as I think they'd impact better for it. But that's just my opinion, like.

This is just the kind of thing I was hoping someone would link me to, in the forum. Lovely stuff. :-)

I Like Your Writing Style Its Diffrent And I Sincerly Admire It *No Lie* "Raindrops trickle, but go unnoticed
Falling softly onto unseen lands
Where perfection remains intact
And beauty still persists" Every Stanza Reaks With Beauty *Smooches* Brilliantly Beautiful 5/5
xxo-Nikk

Interesting poem, though I don't feel like it's relating to the title much except the last part.

Good use of imagery vocab, really painted a beautiful picture even though it is unseen.
I do agree nature is ignored and not appreciated enough; it's sad.
I only have two slight problems with this. I read the poem a few times and each time stumbled over "onto unseen" on the second line of the third stanza.
Also the final too lines I'm not keen on. Maybe they could be expanded on or reworded, but as they are in my opinion they just don't fit in properly with the rest of the poem.
Thanks for sharing.

This poem takes me back to the days when I lived back in the UK and my sister, who would rather sit and chat online or play on her PS2 than come out and with the rest of us for a walk.

Poems like this can ramble on for ever, but yours says everythign it needs to without making it sound contrived. Short, concise and to the point. I like it.

Diction is good and crisp but I feel you could have pushed yourself a little in this department. I do like the way (in the first stanza) you let us forgot about how things came to be and that we should just admire it for what it is.

Flow is even and not that clunky. A rhyme scheme is unimportant to the flow here and this one of the few poems I have enjoyed that lacks one.

Overall I think this a very well constructed and thought out poem, but the best thing is that it feels like this came to you in one go and you didn't have to spend hours tweaking it.

Bret