Great emotional use. Ending is more deserving of something else. Nice job though. Some pointed words brought about something pretty good on the emotional level.
~Faith-less

I loved the start reminds me of my times at home.
But with my mum, dad and brother not just my dad.
I understand your hurt and fustration.
You showed it through the poem ver effectively.
But you lost it at the end.
still a very good poem.
~Emah
p.s thanks for adding me to your favs.
means a lot ;)
5/5