A Frozen Thought

by Laura-Emily   Jul 9, 2006


My light is getting darker
And I'm getting hard to see
My eyes stare into darkness
I'm blind with misery

My blood is feeling colder
And yet it still flows red
My breath somehow feels week and dull
I speak but nothing's said

I go to run but can not move
I cry a flowing river
My heart feels like a lump of coal
I begin to bleed and shiver

Nobody understands my life
The pain that I must suffer
assassinating my self, my body
Is something I must consider

*Please comment and vote, I need to understand what I can do to make my poems better*

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  • 18 years ago

    by mimzy

    Great work..
    Only I noticed a couple of mistakes..
    You typed nothing as northing.. and I'm not sure If "I go to run" is correct english.. But I could be wrong..

    I just thought I'd mention it..
    Apart from that, I really like all your work.. and this piece was great!

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