WOW! I love nature poems, and this one was excellent. I loved the descriptions! The flow was really good. You did a wonderful job on this one!

Cayce x

Both "mornings" and "natures" should have apostrophes... to be "morning's" and "nature's". :)

i really like the set of haiku, though. they read really well :)

Cute and different... well done, keep writing 5/5

Good job on this. This style is different but I like it. I might try it sometime. What I have read so far of yours, it has all been excellent. Keep it up hunn. I think your writing is going to take you somewhere, someday. 5/5 on this.

>black&&blue

I love how the poem seemed to weave together and just write itself. I loved it...the way you placed the words was very nice.

xDarkSuicidex