Aww.. this was so sad! I loved the topic you wrote about. It had a lot of emotion in it. The flow was good but just a little off in some places. The rhyming was good.

I have feelings like everyone else,
That get crushed whenever this happens,
Please try not to lose control,
It scares me, that look that overtakes your eyes,
^^That stanza didn't really rhyme though. Overall this was a good poem. Great job!

Cayce x

Wow this is just really sad. Beautifully written but really sad.

Wow.. this is really good, very emotional and great word usage. I'm sorry if you really have to go through with this! Keep it up and Stay strong! :) 5/5

That was really sad and scary... I got more of the pleading and scared feeling from it... wonderful job of conveying emotions... keep it up! 5/5

Speechless

This is so sad... I'm so sorry if this happens to you.. In a way my boyfriend used to be this way; but emotionaly, not physically.. We worked things out and I really hope you do too... I'm not sure what to say about this, but I felt it because it's happened to me before.. Great write.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5