I Trusted A Liar

by Arcane Blondie   Jul 9, 2006


You`ve made me laugh,
You`ve made me cry,
Made me feel joy,
Yet made me feel pain,

"I love you" is what you would say,
But I never believed it,
"I care about you" is what you would say,
But I knew it was a lie,

After a while I gave up denial,
And I began to believe,
Believe all you told me, all that you said,
But trusting you was a mistake,

You destroyed my hope,
Crushed my self-confidence,
Strangled my trust,
Our friendship was brutally smashed to pieces,

All because I trusted a liar.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    WOW, again another powerful poem. I can totally relate to this, you did an excellent job. Another 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Have you any idea how much I relate to this? I feel like this every day, with a new person... Great job descripting this.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    ^^Thank you for your advice. I changed the wording a bit so maybe it sounds a little better---I'm not sure...

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    My biggest critique would be the use of the same words over and over - like "you" in the first stanza. Maybe switch it up a bit. Someone told me that once about a poem of mine and I rewrote it and I think the reworked version is much better than the original

  • 18 years ago

    by stephanie

    First of all i want to thank you for your comment on my poem=] it means alot.
    i loved this poem! i can relate to it so much. i once trusted a lier and they ended up sending me into a long stage of depression. anywayz keep up the good work! you have a great thing going for you! Much love!- Kitty

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