by Nelle
Well, i would be the baby/sister/angel that brianna is talking about..lol, i definitely understand where your coming from, if this is true!! I wrote a poem about it once, but mine is definitely not this great...i loved it, i love it even more b/c i can relate so well, to it!! you did a great great job with the description, it was perfect! 5/5 |
by Darien
Wow, that's just a depressing story. We are the makers of our own life, and we choose our own path. I hope you make the right decisions, and take care of yourself. (If this is what you go through) If not, then this is a really creative write. Well done, it was really deep. |
Wow----im speechless. Amazing write-everything is perfect about it-the flow, descriptions, word choice, emotions-everything. If this is true I hope you are ok [as ok as you can be]. This is a tough this to go through-its basically an addiction----Love the poem 5/5 Stay Strong! |
Writing poetry is one way of reaching out for help, hopefully if this is a true portrait, you'll share this with someone close who can assist. Life is too short for self infliction. Take care, and keep writing. |
Woah.. |
by Juls
Amazing, I went throught bulmia and I still have a problem with eating. You are a strong person I just can tell by your words you write down, you can get through this. |
by not a poet
Great! i loved the description, it didnt tell you what it was, it made you picture what it was. wonderful! |
by mary
Is this true????? |
by Natalie
The acid starts to burn my throat, |
Seems like your life is as hopless as a last leaf on a dying autumn tree. good job. |
by sophie
OMG |
by Bridgette
Oooh hunni, I hope you don't really do this. I used to be anorexic a couple of years ago, and it still affects my eating pattern. I hope that you are ok :) But this poem is very well written, and you described everything very well, with some great word usage. Great job on this. Keep it up & Stay strong! 5/5 |
Gah... I used to have problems with this. You explained it just as it happened. I could totally relate... I hope you're feeling better and have passed those dark times of life. They are very hard, trust me, I know. |
by Haley
That is really good |
by Kyra
OMG... I never knew so many feelings could be felt from 1 peice of writing. |
by RaiScar*
Wow, this was amazing. I had two friends that were bulimic. Great words, you got flow. I hope this isn't true, God forbid. Definately a 5/5. Keep up the good work darling! |
by Kayla
This poem is the exact same poem in my book titled "perfect'' |
by Kayla
This poem is the exact same poem in my book titled "perfect'' |
No, it is not the same poem, i wrote this, this is my orginial poem and it shouldn't be in your book. |
by Beautifully Nothing
I am seriously at a loss of words. That was an amazing poem. I am going through it right now, and it feels like if you don't get to binge and purge your entire schedule has gone to hell. I am truly sorry for whatever inspired you. The poem makes you think a lot, wonderful job. Keep writing! |