Well, i would be the baby/sister/angel that brianna is talking about..lol, i definitely understand where your coming from, if this is true!! I wrote a poem about it once, but mine is definitely not this great...i loved it, i love it even more b/c i can relate so well, to it!! you did a great great job with the description, it was perfect! 5/5

Wow, that's just a depressing story. We are the makers of our own life, and we choose our own path. I hope you make the right decisions, and take care of yourself. (If this is what you go through) If not, then this is a really creative write. Well done, it was really deep.

Wow----im speechless. Amazing write-everything is perfect about it-the flow, descriptions, word choice, emotions-everything. If this is true I hope you are ok [as ok as you can be]. This is a tough this to go through-its basically an addiction----Love the poem 5/5 Stay Strong!

Writing poetry is one way of reaching out for help, hopefully if this is a true portrait, you'll share this with someone close who can assist. Life is too short for self infliction. Take care, and keep writing.

Woah..
If this isn`t a non-fiction poem ;; you really convinced me that it could be! It was just breathtaking, the rhymes and flow of it all. Amazing job. 5/5

Hollywood

Amazing, I went throught bulmia and I still have a problem with eating. You are a strong person I just can tell by your words you write down, you can get through this.

If you need to talk my email/MSN is bubblegirl290@hotmail.com

Great work, i loved the words you used in the poem.
Juls

Great! i loved the description, it didnt tell you what it was, it made you picture what it was. wonderful!

Is this true?????

The acid starts to burn my throat,
A twisted kind of pleasure,
[Really liked those parts. I once got into throwing up what I was into. And the way you worded that part was fantastic!]
My delight of destroying myself,
Is tearing my life apart.
[Loved those lines also. So much truth in it.]
You've done a wonderful job on this babe. I just hope it isn't based on anything true. I'm always here if you need to talk. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Seems like your life is as hopless as a last leaf on a dying autumn tree. good job.

OMG
dis poem is beautiful huni
i reli luv it i hpe its not real dough
sophzxx

Oooh hunni, I hope you don't really do this. I used to be anorexic a couple of years ago, and it still affects my eating pattern. I hope that you are ok :) But this poem is very well written, and you described everything very well, with some great word usage. Great job on this. Keep it up & Stay strong! 5/5

Gah... I used to have problems with this. You explained it just as it happened. I could totally relate... I hope you're feeling better and have passed those dark times of life. They are very hard, trust me, I know.

Really good use of imagery and rhyme.
I love it.

Love
Tina
< 33

That is really good

OMG... I never knew so many feelings could be felt from 1 peice of writing.
I really love this.
~Kyra~

Wow, this was amazing. I had two friends that were bulimic. Great words, you got flow. I hope this isn't true, God forbid. Definately a 5/5. Keep up the good work darling!
rai*

This poem is the exact same poem in my book titled "perfect''

This poem is the exact same poem in my book titled "perfect''

No, it is not the same poem, i wrote this, this is my orginial poem and it shouldn't be in your book.

I am seriously at a loss of words. That was an amazing poem. I am going through it right now, and it feels like if you don't get to binge and purge your entire schedule has gone to hell. I am truly sorry for whatever inspired you. The poem makes you think a lot, wonderful job. Keep writing!