Revenge

by holly   Jul 10, 2006


**wrote this for a contest had to include certain phrases**

His kisses are like poison.
He walked away, and I died inside.
but like a phoenix i rose from my ashes.
Ready to live,
and learn from that mistake.
I don't need you!

I'm lost here.
Take me away,
to where the sun will shine again.
They were my plans
but then i saw her kissing you
and felt a vicarious joy.
i became completely jealous of her.
i still want you for my own!
nothing can save me from this love
unless
Can you save me from you?
maybe fate, in this darkness, can can cause me to forget you.

ill let you kiss me, kill me
just be mine for a short little while
give me another chance to break your heart.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    Good Job, the flow was a little rocky, and instead of "Give me another chance to break you heart." I t should be "Give me another chance to break your heart."! I thought it was pretty good since you had to do it for a contest and all!! 5/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Wow, surprising ending. Try to work on the flow a bit

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Ohhh. I liked this. Great wording and the flow was pretty well to. Kept my attention. :]

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Give me another chance to break you heart.
    [[should be your]]

    I thought you did a good job considering you had to use certain phrases throughout the poem, and I -think- I know what contest this was for. Excellent job! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Love it..

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