Very nice Tim! It's so exciting to see you trying form poetry!

Great work!

Outstanding haiku, Tim!

I love the imagination that you put into this, truly enchanting.
I'm so glad you've joined the club, you really are rising to the challenge.
Love ya~Holly

Magnificent Tim, what a title! This definitely brings back memories as a child...and as an adult too, I still look at the clouds from time to time, brilliant in its imagery. Thank you for writing it. Denise

Oooooh... I love this poem! Especially the last line, very creative! Congrats on your 30th poem! 5/5 Keep it up!

I bow down to anyone who can write a haiku. I can't seem to get a message across in just three lines. Silly me. This one is great.

This was a beautiful haiku. You used excellent wording for this. Loved it. Keep it up, and thanks for your comment.

Natalie``

Its a wonder how children see things
compared to adults..I like this carefree piece
:) Thank you also for the comment...take care.