by Ye Seul Jul 10, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Take me back to yesterday |
by Jessica
Awwww. ye seul, this was soo good!! it has to be the best poem you have written! i loved it.. your descriptions are beautiful and the emotion was just so clear.. wonderful job! 5/5 |
I liek this. |
by ~Black*Rose~
This poem is so deep, it makes the reader think allot, and that is something you don't find in allot of poems these days, YOu create Marvoluse pictures with your words. |
Aw this was so sad, im sorry:( I dont know what i would do without my boyfriend.I liked the idea of it and even though it didnt rhyme it still flowed really well. |
by Darien
It was a strong poem with a lot of detailed words. I can see some of thes images you created. The emotions felt in this poem were great, an overall good dark poem. Keep on writing! |