by MemoirsOfMe Jul 10, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
I sing a song, |
by Leslie
I liked this one but it feels kind of unfinished. The message is a good one, a perfect one, it fits the american society like a glove, but i feel likeyou could make it better. Form your other writing I feels like you could just make this better somehow. I donmtknwo what you would change, but otherwise its good and I did like it. |
by TheSickness
5/5 |
by Razorblade
Hold on, don't let go, |
This is such a beatifully sad poem. i think it was a really great piece and ou can really see how taented you are when you read it. keep up the good work |
Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us |