Awww, reallyy goood poem!!

Good poem. It would of been better if it rhymed though.

This was really good. =) I liked the creativity. 5/5

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Really goood poem!!
liked the ending.
greatt job!!=)

That was Fantastic. Don't stop writing, you are really good. Better than I am, not hard to beat though! =] Nice Poem!

I love this..especially the very last sentence