Confusion

by Shawna   Jul 10, 2006


This is another poem I wrote when I was 15 or 16. It's different, and you might not understand it at all, but at the time it made a lot of sense to me!!

**Confusion**

The sickness overwhelms my soul,
As I cry in confusion.
As I wonder if you will stay,
The reality brings me down.
What will the future bring,
To my fears and unshown love?
Will I be another lost soul,
Or will you reach out and take my hand?

The silence moves in shadows,
Confusion and sorrow bringing tears.
Will I be lonely all these years?
A small child cries for her father,
Only to find there is no one there.
Runaway from responsibility.
Runaway from commitment and .love.
Confusion corrupted us all.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    I kind of understand the poem, I see where your coming from, it reminds me a bit of a poem I once wrote. The again, I am 16 so it's probably the teenage point of view lol! Nice write.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well done, maybe i didnt get all this poem, but it seemed very well written, keep writing, you do have alot of talent

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, this one was great. I liked the rhymes. They reminded me of a band called The Ataris, they use to have cool rhymes like yours. Good stuff.

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