by Shalisa
I wish the world could be more like us! I love that we never judge because the color of someones skin. It's not right.. why cant the world just see that everyone is the same and beautiful in their own way??! |
by Darien
Yeah, the title was a bit deceptive in the fact this poem really didn't have much too do with racism in a world view. Change the title, that's the only advice I have. It builds up the readers attention, and then it's lost when you read the poem. Anyways, good stuff. |
by Shawna
Well, the poem is about racism, and how it separates people. SO I'm not gonna change the title, thanks for your input though! :-) |
by Chris
I love this one ...very strong and powerful message wonderfull writing |
by Tara Kay
I loved this and its so true, what does the colour of our skin matter, or our religion, or our sex, or anythong in that matter, we are all diffefent and thats how it should be. |
by Sole
Racism is such a sad topic. It's bitter and poor, often comes from those who have little thought about anything except themselves. Your poem really brought out that bitterness, and I strongly reccommend sending it to a racism campaign. |