That was good!.. I liked the rhymes and the flow was on. Awesome stuff. The only thing about this poem, is I read stuff like that too often, so some of these ideas seemed unoriginal, but that's ok, still great poetry.

Well done my friend, this poem was great. the rhymes worked well, the flow was spot on and i loved it.
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I can somewhat relate to this one. The flow and rhyming were both very good. I liked your word choice in this one. Great job!

Cayce x

The question on the last line gives so much impact and emotion to the poem. A great technique, well written. Nice poem, flow was great.

Peace. [Sole]