Ohh honey... I'm so sorry about your gran. I know what it's like to lose someone close, and it hurts more than anything. Just remember that she's still with you, even if you can't see her. Keep her memories with you at all times, and maybe it won't hurt as much. Keep writing and take care.

This poem has so much emotion to it. and its so sad, i think your gran knew how much u did love her michelle. keep wrighting

Wow, agian a poem from you that I really like. It's so wonderful and sad. I just can feel it. Very good work.

You really know how to hit a nerve with the reader...
This was so sad, I have tears in my eyes...but wonderfully written, as always.