Caitlin --
I don`t believe that in my time I`ve read a song quite like this. I actually started singing it to myself aloud! Got some weird looks, but, this is a great song. I especially liked the bridge. The flow throughout the poem was great. You should consider maybe recording this, I`d buy it. =D Great job, dear, 5/5
Love much,
Samantha Hollywood
P.S. - I did four instead of three of your poems ;; I did your most recent. I just enjoyed your work, so, decided to do one more. =D