Its a sad poem
so sad

I loved it, it was soo sad. 5/5

Hey great poem.. really intense. sorry about ur mother if this is true. i cant say i know how you feel.. but i hope everythings better.. i mean falling into place and what not. loved the poem though.
dee

It was great, made me cry tho but only b/c it was really sad and very brilliant...Please don't forget what I have told you hunnie, keep your head high and always reach for the stars..remember your parents are reaching back for you!! don't forget it! xoxo 5/5

That is so sad! To lose a mother is a horrible time in your life. I am so sorry for your loss.
It will seem like a badly worded cliché, but I have felt the pain of losing someone who you love, and it is tremendous, crushing. All I can say is don't hold it in, whatever you do. This kind of pain is too great to hide inside yourself. You have to share it with others, let yourself lean on them for a while.
You may not be a believer of anything in particular, but rest in the confidence that your mother has gone somwhere good. She was loved, I can tell. Somewhere, she was loved a lot, and I think that she has gone to a better place.

Peace.

//T.L.//

Great poem such an emotional piece, keep writing and take care hun sarah x

Ahhh.. This is so sad, Im really sorry for your loss. I dont know what its like to lose my mom i never want to know!!! Anyways you wrote it so beautifully!!! 5/5!!! It was Wonderful!! Your an amazing writer!!! Keep it up!!

Wow, this poem was so sad yet very intense. I'm so sorry that happened to you! I can't say that I understand what your going through, but keep your head up. This poem brought tears to my eyes. I read it over like three times and it got better and better.

The flow was flawless as well as the rhythm. Very emotional. You're an amazing writer. Keep it up. 5/5

Take Care.

--Angie xoxo

P.S. Thank you so much for finding those mistakes on my poem. I was in a hurry to type is yesterday and didn't read it over before posting it up. Thanx a million. =)

Love. Love.

Brandy this is very sad. It brought tears to my eyes. I hope this isn't true. I don't have my Dad around but I couldn't even IMAGINE not having my mom around. That is very very sad. ='(

This poem is very good though. The flow was excellent and the style you have it in is great. Keep it up.

>black&&blue

Wow. I hope this really isn't true. If any of this was based of true events I'm so sorry. Really, and if you ever need someone to talk to, I'm here. =)

I thought the poem though was really well done. You could feel the emotions this girl was feeling, how shocked she was. A very good write indeed. Keep it up hun. 5/5

Natalie``

I lost my mom too, I don`t know for sure if you did but I think you did ,
Because the one thing that stays forever in my mind is the phone call
telling me she had died. Its a horrible
feeling! My heart goes out to you.
So good that you can express it.
It helps to remember the good times.
Great poem.

Im really sorry about your mother if this poem it true. I kinda now the feeling. When my grandma died there was that phone call. I may not have anwsered the phone but that is when it started.

So many times ppl had asked me who is the person you love the most? I always said MY MOM, then I saw it is not just me but for everyone mim is the greatest. In this poem I think you really successed to put down your great emotion. It made me cry.
great job and 5/5

Wow that is very well written. The flow and the structure was great. Please tell me this is not true, and if it is I am truely sorry for you loss. Amazing write, it was filled with emotion.

Peace, Joe

This poem has some strong emotion behind it but the reader doesn't feel the pain, disbelief, and sorrow. I say the true statement that everyone says "show, don't tell". The flow is awkward in places, for example: "With tears now running down my cheek,
I keep thinking this is absurd." Also, i would suggest expanding the vocabulary and using a variety of words. With some work, this poem could turn out amazing! Good luck!

xxEvilAngelxx

Wow thats a rele sad poem! plz comment my poems too if u ever read them!

Aww, dats so sad.. i started to tear up!!.
its really good, sad but good.