by Darien Jul 10, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Forever and Always |
by Cassie Cain
Beautiful! i love this poem its amazing.. ur a great poem.. keep up the good work! |
by IML
Awesome. i love this poem. great writing and choice of words to rhyme. |
by IML
I need a tissue Lol. Great poem. I loved it. |
by LoveableADii
Aww tats soo cute |
by Blissful
The title was beautiful. So simple yet filled with so much meaning. I loved your opening stanza because it just lured me into this beautiful scene and I was eager to read more because you described the emotions flawlessly. The flow of this was so fluid and everything seemed to come so naturally for you which was enjoyable to read. I loved how you ended it because it completed the scene nicely. Well done *5/5* |