Flow wasn't great. Sound content. Words didn't exactly help which they could've done. Not bad but not great. Words should probably be a bit more... better chosen.
~Faith-less

I like this poem, it's a bit of a twist on a dark poems, even though most dark poems are similar..It's a little hard to explain, I like how good this poem was for the fact that it was so short..This is one of the better poems I have read that are 1 stanza, haha..

All I can suggest is to fix the error in the language, The apostrophe got changed for other symbols..And the 'A' in the title is capitalized..

Also, I think you should try and add more detail to make the poem more picture..est. So I can visualize exactluy what was going on in your head when I read this.

Good write.

I liked this one. It's very deep and filled with emotion. It was very nicely written. GREAT WORK!

-Jennifer.