Good work. I like the repetition of the third stanza.

OMG this gave me the chills, which is good, Keep on writing.

Hey hun long time since i have been on here.... I still love you poetry it kicks ass... so when ya get this keep it coming and i look forward to reading your next one..... byezzzzzzzz

Really good poem! hope you keep writing! katie

Hey there... this is 'brokentessa,' i just have 2 accounts.
thank you for you comment.

That was a really good poem. I Loved reading it. 5/5