An interested piece. Quite harmonious or not as the baa baa black sheep implies. Good play with that nursery rhyme by the way.
The only suggestion I have is for the last stanza. The I's should be capitalised and on the first line "its" should be "it's".
I enjoyed this.

Interesting little poem. I particularly liked the last stanza with the play on Baa Baa Black sheep and the phoenix left as a pile of singing ashes.' rather than it's usual hopeful image.

I find this a very interesting play with words and nursery rhymes. I found it a bit difficult to follow at times, but it's quite good nonetheless.

Biscuit --
I gave this poem a 4/5. The flow was pretty good, but I just didn`t understand the intent of the poem. It really made no sense to me ;; but it was well written, keep it up. 4/5.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

I loved the last stanza... It was gorgeous.. The rest was a bit rocky, but I liked it nonetheless.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Ooooo a poem about my favorite mystical animal...The pheonix. Great poem, havent seen to many poems about a Pheonix and this was very well writen 5/5