Stars align

by Chris   Jul 10, 2006


This is the answer the truth is that I cant answer your question about the stars or how the planets align
Because if I gave you an answer it might damage your mind

Its' back and forth with these dull arguments they damage the time left
My words pass through your ears the correct statement is mind theft

Right left up Through the middle
I see thoughts form a riddle
And often thought just a little about the actions that caused this
If perception is reality then Ive really lost it

I'm exhausted but still stretch seconds to hours
Never seen without my weapon yet I'm reaching for power

With the weather that cowards the sky above were we stay
We still judge one another upon the words that we say

And sun shines through the clear cut edge of the rain drops
So you can see people start caring again when all the pain stops.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Hmm, interesting piece. I really think this falls under nature.

    Especially because the ending has some really beautiful images.

  • 18 years ago

    by Courtney

    Great job. Keep up the good work. Much love.

    -*La Little Lor Lor*

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Chris --
    This, unlike your other poem that I read, is definitely more suitable for this site. I can understand it, and it`s hard to believe you can write two poems so different from eachother!! Great job, this one completely changed my impression of you.
    5/5

    Samantha Hollywood

  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    *slang

  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Hey, this was a really good poem, it had strong lines and rhymes, but it was a bit hard to read, you might want to divide it up into stanzas so you don't have to hunt to find the rhymes. Also, it's a not a very good idea to use sland in your poem, such as "my words pass through YA ears", it makes it seem less professional. Other than those two things, i really did like the poem and i give it a 5/5.

    Great work

    --Steph

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