Very random yet orginized, i like the style! welcome to the website! like the work!

THIS IS CONFUSING AND IVE ONLY READ THE FIRST 3 LINES

Hey, this was a really good poem, it had strong lines and rhymes, but it was a bit hard to read, you might want to divide it up into stanzas so you don't have to hunt to find the rhymes. Also, it's a not a very good idea to use sland in your poem, such as "my words pass through YA ears", it makes it seem less professional. Other than those two things, i really did like the poem and i give it a 5/5.

Great work

--Steph

*slang

Chris --
This, unlike your other poem that I read, is definitely more suitable for this site. I can understand it, and it`s hard to believe you can write two poems so different from eachother!! Great job, this one completely changed my impression of you.
5/5

Samantha Hollywood

Great job. Keep up the good work. Much love.

-*La Little Lor Lor*

Hmm, interesting piece. I really think this falls under nature.

Especially because the ending has some really beautiful images.