I really like this. Are you a rapper? Either way this is really good. It flowed very well. Except on:
Ispit it every minute and second
conceal my Mic as a weapon
Igot an answer for questions that you might ask
you forgot to put a space between I spit and also I got. It kind of messed me up a bit, but that can be easily fixed. But other than that this is really good. Keep it up!