Slowly tearing

by Chris   Jul 10, 2006


Just stop
this is a real heart that your playing with
not thinking about my feelings
and not caring when you saying it
i don't know why I ever put up in the time
when i knew it was bound to happen
it was even up in my lines
i could of read all the signs
and could of saved all this pain
but I just ignored the facts
and acted like it was the same
everyday every night you were always up in my prayers
but I guess I wasn't praying right because nobody cares
I brought this upon myself..
so I don't need you to help guide me
I was fine on my own before with nobody else beside me

I just wish I can find someone that cares as much as I do
I guess this was one of the bumps... kinda funny how I knew...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Pretend--ToLoveMe

    I really like this peom because one you are great at putting so my emotions into words. It's crazy. And Second, the lines "I brought this upon myself..
    so I don't need you to help guide me
    I was fine on my own before with nobody else beside me" are wonderful because it's true, I mean.. we [usually] know how things will end.

    Overall. Wonderful. Keep up the grand work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hope

    Good job on this poem.
    I know what you feel like kinda.
    But I like this guy thats my best friend.
    But now he hates me cause his gf does.
    I just wish I could find someone that loves me for me.
    && you will find that person too.

    Love,
    Hope-Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is really good. I can definitely relate to it. The only advice I have to give you is to maybe break it up a bit to give it some structure. Put it in stanzas according to the flow. But I love the emotions behind it. Great job on this. 5/5

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